TRICK OR…
Princess-costumed Samantha stopped as she saw her runaway beagle Max enter Mrs. Ghoul’s house. Samantha shivered – not from the cold, but the fear of Mrs. Ghoul. They said she was a witch! But Samantha had no choice; she must rescue Max.
As she crept up the steps, the door opened. Samantha heard Max howling. His cries came from inside a deep cauldron sitting near the doorway.
“She’s cooking Max!” Samantha screamed.
“No dear,” said Mrs. Ghoul. “He jumped in when he smelled the candy.”
“Candy? But they said you were a…”
“Witch?” cackled Mrs. Ghoul. “Do witches handout candy?”
Note: This is yet another entry for Susanna Leonard Hill’s Halloweensie Contest, where writers are challenged to write a Halloween story, in one hundred words or less. Writers must use the following words – in any form – in their stories: shiver, cauldron and howl.
Please visit this site to see all of the imaginative entries submitted – or to enter one of your own! https://susannahill.com/2018/10/08/the-nina-the-pinta-and-the-guidelines-for-the-8th-annual-halloweensie-contest/
You’ve kept all of us guessing, Colleen…and that is the mark of a great story…well done!
By: viviankirkfield on November 12, 2018
at 6:36 am
Thank you so much for stopping by Vivian, and thanks for the kind remarks! ❤
By: celticsea on November 12, 2018
at 11:56 am
Oh, boy! I’m not at all sure I trust Mrs. Ghoul! Nice job, Colleen! Thanks for another great entry!
By: Susanna Leonard Hill on November 4, 2018
at 1:46 am
Thanks Susanna! And thank you for all the work you are investing in this contest! SOOOOO many entries!
By: celticsea on November 4, 2018
at 11:32 am
Good twist at the end. Good luck.
By: awritersdream41 on October 31, 2018
at 4:33 pm
Thank you! And thanks for stopping by!
By: celticsea on October 31, 2018
at 4:39 pm
Good for him. Max knew she wasn’t a witch!
By: Janet Smart on October 30, 2018
at 12:21 am
Or, he was really persuaded by the candy!
Thanks for stopping by!
By: celticsea on October 30, 2018
at 12:40 am
Hope Max didn’t eat too much candy! A fun Halloweensie story!
By: ptnozell on October 29, 2018
at 8:33 pm
If he is anything like my brother’s beagle, he did! Thanks for stopping by!
By: celticsea on October 29, 2018
at 9:38 pm
I like witches that hand out candy. Good luck!
By: Gregory E Bray on October 29, 2018
at 6:00 pm
Ha ha, but is she a witch?
By: celticsea on October 29, 2018
at 8:07 pm
Fun story. Hmm, a ghoul with a cauldron – sounds sneaky. Good Luck.
By: Maria Marshall on October 28, 2018
at 7:44 pm
Thanks Maria! She is Mrs. Ghoul – just a last name, or not?
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 8:25 pm