Do You Dare?
“I dare you, Sam, to trick-or-treat at Old Man Daniel’s place.
They say he killed a bear by hand and’s missing half his face.
“He never saw a doctor and the maggots, so they say,
are feeding off his open wounds and eating flesh away.”
“I’m not afraid of nothing and besides, it can’t be true.
If I decide to take this dare, what do I get from you?”
“I’ll give you all my candy, once you eat what he hands out;
he’ll give you juicy maggots from his bloody face, no doubt!”
“You’re on!” said Sam to Peter, “But you better keep your word!”
As secretly he prayed there was no truth to what he’d heard.
On Halloween, with fingers crossed, Sam knocked on Daniel’s door.
The man who answered’s face was hidden by the mask he wore.
Relieved, Sam took the candy, told him thanks and turned to run
and meet back up with Peter, glad this dare was almost done.
“All set!” he said, then showed him.
“Are you sure?” asked Peter, giggling
He raised the bag that Sam just got
“Your gummy worms are wiggling.”
This is an entry for an October challenge, Kidlit Fall Writing Frenzy hosted by Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez and Lydia Lukidis https://mathiseverywhere439319476.wordpress.com/2019/09/30/kidlit-fall-writing-frenzy/?fbclid=IwAR21ela92iv3xW8dCQLtiILdTKCjfgHeBhiw-YPB9wpX5BtLM4c_QKFnARM based on an image of gummy worms (image 8). I was limited to 200 words, and this comes in at 189.
EWWWW!!!! I hate it when my gummy words wiggle.
By: Sarah Tobias on October 15, 2019
at 7:19 pm
But they had to in this case, didn’t they? Thank you for stopping by!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 15, 2019
at 7:24 pm
Love the dare and the rhyme. A fun, spook read,
By: Kathy Halsey on October 13, 2019
at 6:41 pm
Thanks Kathy!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 13, 2019
at 11:29 pm
Ooohhh…. Creepy story! Nicely done!
By: 2cookscraftingbooks on October 13, 2019
at 1:11 am
Thank you!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 13, 2019
at 12:40 pm
Love this!! Great rhyming and great story! Good Luck!
By: Vasilia Graboski on October 12, 2019
at 5:25 pm
Thank you Vasilla. I loved your take on the image you used for inspiration. Good luck with the contest!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 12, 2019
at 5:33 pm
So gruesomely glorious! Well done, Colleen!
By: Cathy L. Murphy on October 12, 2019
at 12:40 pm
Thank you Cathy!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 12, 2019
at 1:57 pm
I love a good dare, and I love a good creepy rhyme.God on you, Colleen!
By: Cathy C. Hall on October 10, 2019
at 2:28 pm
Um…that should be Good! Though I’m sure the good Lord enjoyed your poem as well! Hahahahha!
By: Cathy C. Hall on October 10, 2019
at 2:29 pm
I knew what you meant!! LOL. I appreciate the fact you stopped in to read my entry. The dare just seemed to be the right vehicle for this Halloween story.
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 10, 2019
at 5:22 pm
Lol! Love the unexpected ending! Nice!
By: Rachel Funez on October 10, 2019
at 1:29 pm
Thanks Rachel!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 10, 2019
at 1:44 pm
So gross but so perfect for Halloween! The rhyme gives it the flavor(!) of a folk song/tale. @AnneLipton
By: anneuro on October 10, 2019
at 5:04 am
Ha ha! I don’t normally write gross material, but it couldn’t be helped here. Thanks for checking out my entry!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 10, 2019
at 1:05 pm
Anne, did you enter? If so, could you please provide a link so I can read your entry. I am doing what I can to read a lot of submissions, but I know I will not get to all of them!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 10, 2019
at 1:45 pm
Loved your ending!
By: melissamiles1 on October 9, 2019
at 10:29 am
Thanks Melissa!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 9, 2019
at 1:07 pm
Fun story! I can imagine the little boys daring each to go get the candy.
By: Susan Drew on October 8, 2019
at 10:40 pm
Thank you! I am glad it seemed plausible!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 9, 2019
at 1:06 pm
This story really got me in the Halloween groove 🙂 .
By: Jennifer Parker Raudenbush on October 8, 2019
at 5:46 pm
I am glad it did! Thanks for stopping by Jennifer.
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 8, 2019
at 7:40 pm
This was so creepy and fun. I am super impressed by your rhyming.
By: teacherwriteracker on October 8, 2019
at 2:02 am
Thank you!!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 8, 2019
at 10:05 am
Colleen, I love how we both picked up on the “dare” vibe. I would think the chances of that would be slim, but apparently not! LOL
I love your concept, your rhymes, and the surprise ending. Good luck! 🙂
By: gayleckrause on October 7, 2019
at 9:52 pm
I guess rhyming, Halloween and dares kind of go together, but at least we took them in different directions!! Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 7, 2019
at 10:05 pm
Loved reading your take on image #8!
By: brittanypomales on October 7, 2019
at 3:57 pm
Thanks Brittany!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 7, 2019
at 6:34 pm
So much fun, Colleen! I always admire rhymers, and you’ve done it so well while incorporating gross-out imagery and humor. Well done!!
By: Jolene Ballard Gutiérrez on October 7, 2019
at 2:27 pm
Ha ha! Thank you! I am looking forward to reading your entry.
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 7, 2019
at 6:34 pm
Haha! This is so great. Wonderful rhythm and so funny, I was hanging in anticipation from the start and love the ending. Good luck, Colleen, thanks so much for starting the competition off with a bang!
By: Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez on October 7, 2019
at 11:51 am
Thanks again for the opportunity Kaitlyn. I think your judging will be a challenge because there are going to be so many different styles. On the other hand, it will be fun to see the range of entries. Good luck with your contest!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 7, 2019
at 12:51 pm
You’re very welcome and agreed, with so many talented writers, it will be difficult!
By: Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez on October 7, 2019
at 1:53 pm