The skeletons stared. The spiders crept.
With dinner downed, the children prepped
for trick-or-treat — well all except
the youngest, Tommy-Lee, who slept.
At least he closed his eyes and tried.
Those scary masks; the dark outside.
The prospects made him terrified.
“I’ve got a tummy ache,” he lied.
The others knew their brother’s game
(In fact, Jolene had done the same.)
And so their mission now became
to set their brother’s feet aflame.
“Do you want buckets bulging through
with Reese’s Cups and Snickers too
with both of us protecting you?”
To that their brother said, “I do!”
99 words
This entry if for Susanna Hill’s 10th Annual Halloweensie contest. All are welcome to compete. Simply write a story, in 100 words or less, about Halloween, for children, using the words skeleton, mask and creep.
Doin’ The Skeleton Dance! Announcing The 10th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest!
Fantastic! I absolutely love this! It’s something kids can definitely relate to.
By: dlitwer on November 3, 2020
at 1:58 am
Thank you so much! I hope you are right!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 3, 2020
at 3:56 pm
It’s so sweet how encouraging the big siblings are.
By: katiefischerwrites on November 2, 2020
at 2:04 am
Thanks Katie!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 2, 2020
at 1:33 pm
I’d get up for Reese’s and Snickers, too!
By: Chel Owens on November 2, 2020
at 12:39 am
Ha ha! Me too!!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 2, 2020
at 1:21 am
I like your rhyme scheme. And I love how the story progresses. I think my favorite line is: “to set their brother’s feet aflame.” LOL, that would be my brothers. Good luck!
By: Jilanne Hoffmann on November 1, 2020
at 10:17 pm
Thanks for the comments and for stopping by to read my entry Jilanne! I am heading over to read your story now!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 2, 2020
at 1:28 am
Another great story, Colleen. I love your rhyme scheme and how the siblings offer to protect he to get the candy. Good luck!
By: Nancy Riley on November 1, 2020
at 10:14 pm
Thank you Nancy! I cannot wait to read your entry!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 2, 2020
at 1:21 am
I’m so glad the siblings understood and helped. There is a nice dose of empathy in those 99 words.
By: teacherwriteracker on November 1, 2020
at 10:12 pm
Thank you! I just felt like, given the current state in our country, empathy was required.
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 2, 2020
at 1:16 am
Great rhyming story. I love how his siblings sympathize, but candy always wins out! Cute ending.
By: M.A. Cortez on November 1, 2020
at 12:21 am
Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 1, 2020
at 2:03 am
You just can’t resist the lure of treats! Such a cute story, Colleen! Best of luck in the contest!
By: Jill Lambert (@LJillLambert) on October 31, 2020
at 11:57 pm
Thanks Jill! Can’t wait to read your entry!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 1, 2020
at 2:02 am
This is is so sweet! It’s delightful to read aloud. Great job!
By: Sarah Meade on October 30, 2020
at 12:51 pm
Thank you Sarah! Given the times, I wanted to try to write something a little more tender.
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 30, 2020
at 2:00 pm
I tried to comment on your second story, but the site kept telling me it could not be posted. So, I am posting it here:
I really like you have the role reversals in your story, and then the thoughtful sister who incorporates both siblings ideas into her own costume. Good luck!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 30, 2020
at 2:07 pm
Aw, that was sweet, Colleen!
By: colleendougherty on October 29, 2020
at 8:51 pm
Thanks Colleen! LOL. Great name!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 29, 2020
at 10:29 pm
Colleen, I tried to post on your site, but Disqus was giving me issues. Here is my comment on your great entry:
What a fun story! My daughter dresses up her cats all the time, so I understand Walter’s wish to escape! Good luck!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on November 2, 2020
at 1:44 am
It’s really clever the way you’ve constructed each verse around a single rhyme! I’m sure lots of children would empathise with little Tommy-Lee – loads of kid-appeal in this story – good luck!
By: claireflewis on October 29, 2020
at 8:51 pm
Thanks Claire!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 29, 2020
at 10:28 pm
I enjoyed this!
By: melissamiles1 on October 29, 2020
at 8:11 pm
Thanks Melissa!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 29, 2020
at 10:24 pm
I enjoyed this fun poem! Good luck in the contest.
By: rosecappelli on October 29, 2020
at 3:55 pm
Thanks!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on October 29, 2020
at 6:26 pm