Cora wrestled in her bed
while thinking of Miss Mae.
She hadn’t been to visit her
since Grandma went away.
The lemon scent. The comfy chair.
The daisies in the vase.
The Jello cups. The candy mints—
all things she couldn’t face.
But up until tonight, at least,
she hadn’t thought to care
how all alone Miss Mae would be
without her grandma there.
So Cora tossed her covers off’
retrieved her art supplies,
then cut and colored paper hearts,
each one a different size.
Though Cora tried to wipe her tears,
some landed on her art.
“These should have been for Grandma too.”
She pressed one to her heart.
And then with all the crafting done,
while sitting in her bed,
Cora kissed the heart she held.
“Please give me strength,” she said.
******
The smell of pancakes woke her up,
the heart lay on her chest.
She tucked it in her mirror’s frame
then gathered up the rest.
Before she sat for breakfast,
she took her mother’s hand.
“I’m scared, but have to see Miss Mae.”
“My dear, I understand.”
******
“Oh Grandma,” Cora said that night,
“I bet you knew I’d see
those Valentines I gave Miss Mae
were also gifts to me.”
This is an entry for the 6th Annual Valentiny Contest generously brought to you by Susanna Leonard Hill! Writers need to craft a story, written for children, in 214 words are less. The theme is Valentine’s Day and bravery. Here is the link to the contest if you are interested in entering: https://susannahill.com/2021/02/12/be-brave-my-heart-the-6th-annual-valentiny-contest-is-here/
What a beautiful, heartfelt, lovely story! Seriously left me teary-eyed! ❤
By: Laken Slate on February 16, 2021
at 6:34 am
Thank you Laken!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 16, 2021
at 2:47 pm
This is so sweet. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
By: susaninez0905 on February 14, 2021
at 3:49 pm
Thank you for reading!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 14, 2021
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[…] + People: Healing Hearts by Colleen […]
By: Valentine’s Day Rocks – Samantha Cora on February 14, 2021
at 12:49 pm
Samantha, I visited your site and read your blog page. I really enjoyed your shorter entry as well as your extended story. I tried to log in to comment, but WordPress was being difficult.
Good luck in the contest and even better luck with your writing career. And, the drawings are adorable!
Lastly, I was honored to see my story listed as one of your favorites. ❤
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 14, 2021
at 4:28 pm
What a wonderful and touching story, Colleen! You are such a fantastic writer.
By: Nancy Riley on February 14, 2021
at 4:34 am
Thanks Nancy!! I am looking forward to reading your entry!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 14, 2021
at 4:11 pm
That was beautiful!
By: colleendougherty on February 13, 2021
at 7:04 pm
Thank you Colleen! LOL. And we even spell it the same!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 13, 2021
at 7:23 pm
What a sweet message of friendship. I love the understanding your MC develops through your story.
By: Rebekah Hoeft on February 13, 2021
at 6:48 pm
Thank you Rebekah!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 13, 2021
at 7:24 pm
Colleen, this is so touching…thank you for this beautiful Valentine gift!
By: syorkeviney on February 13, 2021
at 3:35 am
Thank you for stopping by to read my story!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 13, 2021
at 12:41 pm
Such a lovely, sweet and tender story, Colleen. I’m so glad she went to make Miss Mae’s day special… and her own in the process 😊
By: Susanna Leonard Hill on February 13, 2021
at 2:31 am
Thank you for the challenge and for the comments Susanna!
And I just reread the new directions – the ones printed in RED!!! – and realized I should have just posted in the comments section!! So sorry to make your job a little more challenging. I would post in the comments now, but I think it is too late since I already posted in the blog only section. Ugh!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 13, 2021
at 3:16 am
So rich with feeling. I was tearing up at the end. Bravo!
By: Armineh Manookian on February 12, 2021
at 10:58 pm
Thank you Armineh!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 13, 2021
at 3:15 am
Oh, my heart. What a beautiful and hopeful message of generosity and courage told in such an expressive, emotional short piece. Your poem is a gift, Colleen.
By: Anne Lipton on February 12, 2021
at 10:34 pm
Aww! Your comments are a gift to me. Thank you Anne!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 12, 2021
at 10:48 pm
My goodness, that is moving! So tender.
By: Simon Yeend (@SimonYeend) on February 12, 2021
at 10:31 pm
Thanks Simon!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 12, 2021
at 10:47 pm
What a special story! Way to capture the theme of bravery and Valentines! Well done and good luck to you!
By: Molly Ippolito on February 12, 2021
at 9:31 pm
Thank you Molly!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 12, 2021
at 10:06 pm
Beautiful! I love the sentiment and sweet ending.
By: Sarah Meade on February 12, 2021
at 6:50 pm
Thanks Sarah!
By: Colleen Owen Murphy on February 12, 2021
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