“Ahoy mateys! Ye be ready to search for the booty?”
“Aye, aye Cap’n Pete!” yelled the other boys.
“Here be the treasure map me Seadog dad made.”
Pete followed the map and the boys followed Pete throughout their neighborhoods.
After what seemed like hours Pete said, “Blimey mates! Still no Jolly Roger in sight!”
Quincy looked over Pete’s shoulder. “Ye be holding the map upside down Cap’n!”
The boys howled with laughter.
“Er…,” said Pete, “just testing ye Scallywags.”
Redirected, they soon sighted the flag.
Relieved, Pete cried, “Shiver me timbers mateys! There be a candy-filled cauldron for us all!”
Note: This is an entry for Susanna Leonard Hill’s Halloweensie Contest, where writers are challenged to write a Halloween story, in one hundred words or less. Writers must use the following words – in any form – in their stories: shiver, cauldron and howl.
The Nina, The Pinta, and the Guidelines for the 8th Annual Halloweensie Contest!!!
Hahahaha! Love the upside down problem. What a great story in so few words!
Finally getting around to reading more of these from the contest, so much fun!
By: Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez on November 19, 2018
at 4:30 pm
Thanks Kaitlyn! I am thinking it wasn’t Halloween-enough for the contest, but it was fun to write. Thank you for stopping in to read my entry!
By: celticsea on November 19, 2018
at 11:23 pm
Anytime! I’m following your blog now 😊 feel free to follow mine too:)
By: Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez on November 19, 2018
at 11:38 pm
What a fun pirate story and your pirate dialect is spot on. Really enjoyed this Colleen!
By: Traci Bold on November 1, 2018
at 12:28 pm
Thank you Traci! It was fun to write too, so I am glad you enjoyed it.
By: celticsea on November 2, 2018
at 10:53 am
I just love a good pirate Halloween story. So funny.
By: jeanjames926 on November 1, 2018
at 12:27 pm
Thank you Jean!
By: celticsea on November 2, 2018
at 10:49 am
I love pirates for Halloween! Such a great costume & so many possibilities! Happy Halloweensie!
By: ptnozell on October 29, 2018
at 8:36 pm
Thanks for stopping in to read both of my stories!
By: celticsea on October 29, 2018
at 9:39 pm
Love this story! So creative to use shiver and howled in a story about pirates. I’m glad they found their treasure of candy.
By: Megan Walvoord (@mjwalvoord2) on October 29, 2018
at 7:38 pm
Thank you Megan. The shiver me timbers came right away; the rest developed from there. And I could not leave a bunch of pirates without the candy treasure!
By: celticsea on October 29, 2018
at 8:04 pm
What a cute story and a great way to use the word shiver. 🙂
By: lmconnors on October 29, 2018
at 5:21 pm
Thank you! It was the first thing that came to me!
By: celticsea on October 29, 2018
at 8:03 pm
Candy filled cauldron’s are the best. Good luck!
By: Gregory E Bray on October 29, 2018
at 3:04 pm
Thanks Gregory!
By: celticsea on October 29, 2018
at 8:02 pm
Great pirate language and I can relate to upside down maps. Good luck!
By: MD Knabb on October 28, 2018
at 7:49 pm
Ha ha! Thanks MD!
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 8:26 pm
Love the pirate talk and upside down map line! Good luck and Happy Halloween!
By: thislittlebirdie on October 28, 2018
at 1:35 pm
Thanks little birdie! Lol.
Happy Halloween to you as well!
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 3:22 pm
Fun combination of pirates and Halloween. Love the upside down map.
By: Maria Marshall on October 28, 2018
at 5:18 am
Thanks Maria. Honestly I still chuckle when I read that line – and I know it is coming.
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 11:32 am
Nice job! I love pirate speak. Cute story. Good luck.
By: M.A. Cortez on October 28, 2018
at 4:28 am
Thank you! It was fun to figure out how to use the pirate speak.
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 11:31 am
Very cute story!
By: Kelly on October 28, 2018
at 3:41 am
Thanks Kelly!
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 11:24 am
Great story!
By: Carole Lynn Jones on October 28, 2018
at 2:00 am
Thanks Carole!
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 11:25 am
So cute. Love the kid humor pirate style.
By: authorjanetparkinsonbryce on October 27, 2018
at 8:09 pm
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments Janet!
By: celticsea on October 28, 2018
at 11:27 am
Love anything piratey! Great use of the three words. Good luck!
By: rosecappelli on October 27, 2018
at 5:48 pm
Thank you Rose! I saw the word “shiver” and that is where my mind went. I guess having daughters who loved PIRATES OF CARIBBEAN helped.
I appreciate your stopping in to read my story!
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 6:03 pm
I love it, Colleen. You made great use of your words. Love Seadog Dad and your pirate humor. Excellent job, my friend.
By: Robyn Campbell on October 27, 2018
at 3:53 pm
Thank you Robyn! It was fun to write, but a challenge – as you know – to tell a story in 100 words!!
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 4:00 pm
Sounds like the story of my life ;). Fun story.
By: Johnell DeWitt on October 27, 2018
at 3:37 pm
Ha ha! Thanks for stopping by!
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 3:59 pm
Ha ha. Holding the map upside down – he should have removed his eye patch. Fun piratey Halloween story.
By: Janet Smart on October 27, 2018
at 3:04 pm
I like that idea! If only I had a few more words. Lol. Thanks for stopping by and reading my entry Janet.
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 3:14 pm
Pirates are one of our favorite Halloween costume choices in our household! Cute story, Colleen, I enjoyed how the map was upside down
By: candicemarleyconner on October 27, 2018
at 2:22 pm
Thanks Candice! I am glad you liked it.
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 2:26 pm
Now, that’s what I call a great Halloween treasure, Colleen! Good luck!
By: Nancy Riley on October 27, 2018
at 12:40 pm
Thanks Nancy!
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 12:41 pm
Shiver me timbers! What playful piratey language you use. Good luck on the contest!
By: Kari Gonzalez on October 27, 2018
at 12:31 pm
Thanks Kari!
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 12:38 pm
What a fun map misreading spin on a pirate Halloween, Colleen! I for one am grateful for google maps since I was never much good at getting things right way round :). Well done telling your story in exactly 100 words! Thanks for joining in the shivery fun!
By: Susanna Leonard Hill on October 27, 2018
at 11:39 am
Thank you Susanna and thanks for providing the challenge – and it is indeed a challenge to tell a tale with an arc (albeit slight) in one hundred words. I may try a rhyming one too. We shall see. I did enjoy reading yours. 🙂
By: celticsea on October 27, 2018
at 11:46 am